Strengths
Sound created the atmosphere for the clip and flowed well, volume changed in the music at the right time.
Good variety of shots used, for example close ups, match on action.
Weaknesses
Unclear dialogue.
Mise-en-scene was poor as the briefcase was not in my hands at some points.
Lighting was quite dark and unable to see action properly
Girl walked across the camera in one of the scenes, this ruins the flow of the shot.
what needs improving:
lighting needs to improve
dialogue needs to improve
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